nowadays, people have busy schedule , and very bored with routine schedule therefor, to travel is good idea for refreshment, and good opportunity to spend time with family and friends to visit the world.
some people enjoy to travel alone whereas others want to travel with family and friends and led by tour guide.
I concur with the view that the best way to travel is in group and led by tour guide.
to begin, to travel with a group is good idea because the place is new and it will be much enjoyable if a friendly group accompany you as well as travel will be much easier if it led by a tour guide, for instance reserving hotel , ticket and providing food and etc.
I have personal experience , i have visited India with my colleagues and our group was led by tour guide, the trip was much convenient because room was already book from tour guide , I don't like spicy food and it was difficult to find food without spice , but the tour guide already booked another restaurant for me.
in addition, to travel in a group is good idea because we can find new friends and contacts also it is difficult to travel alone specially for female , some ladies scare to travel alone because some of problem like language, culture.
further more , to travel in group and led by tour guide has some advantages like get discount , for instance when i have visited India with my colleagues tour guide provide us 20 percent discount for hotel.
also for emergency case, they provide free health care as well.
to conclude it is always good opportunity to travel in group and led by tour guide
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61267605634 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30175714289 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461267605634 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.0180859535 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.555555556 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215653435641 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128508942188 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944875342441 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128508942188 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944875342441 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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