TPO-20:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Views differ considerably when it comes to the question of whether successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know well. As far as I am concerned, successful people will always try new thinks because this could help them adapt into the rapidly changing world.
First of all, successful people are always willing to take the risks trying new things, which leads them to the opportunity of being success. For example, Mark Ma built the empire of E-commerce in China because he was the only one willing to take the risk to invest on the unknown area two decades ago. Elon Musk has become the legend in Silicon Valley because he took the risks to build SpackX and Tesla even though nobody supported his idea by that time. There are also a lot of successful celebrities, whose experience would tell us the same story that risks always come with opportunities.
In addition, successful people are always willing to adopt new ideas and new technologies, which is essential for them to keep up with the rapid development of the world. For example, the CEO of the company which I am working for, is a middle-aged man who has never studied at university. He knew nothing about computer and could not speak English. However, in order to keep up with the development of technology and international business market, he managed to learn English and how to use computer at his fifty's. This is why he could keep leading our company to grow year by year.
Admittedly, sometimes doing things that people know how to do well can bring them advantages because experts always come from the area that they have been working for decades. However, the world is changing so fast and no one could guarantee the knowledge and skills learned yesterday will not become outdated today. In order to keep competitive in the society, people have to stay alert and willing to learn new things.
In conclusion, successful people will always try new things rather than only doing what they are good at, as this is what brings them opportunity of success and how they keep up with the development of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...ws differ considerably when it comes to the question of whether successful people try new things and ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77445652174 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50019936587 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516304347826 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.844647851 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.133333333 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300659922817 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106632959285 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126482488481 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210574342147 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111244774783 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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