Since many years there are lots educational breakthroughs happening around the world. It is highly debatable topic that teacher make their social or political views in the classroom. I think teacher should forbid social and political views in the class because such views will distract students mind regarding interest to school subjects. In addition, teacher by spreading politics would be in low rank of teacher ranking list. I will explore each reason in this essay.
To commence with, school students are at very tender age that they get distracted very easily by surrounding influences. political views play crucial role in distracting students from studying. My own experience is compelling example of this. when i was in high school, my teacher always used to share political views instead lecture. After that whenever I studied, I kept focus on politics. Next day I shared with my teacher, could you please stopping social or politics in the class. She started punishing me although exams were behind the class, I constantly repeated my words in front of her. Her subject knocked door of the class, I was like to starting answers to all question, I checked the questions which were all about politics attitude in spite of biology. As a result, first time I ever failed in her exam and realized I failed because of informed the teacher to stay away from politic views in the classroom.
Secondly, though teacher are the one who make us good and sensible person it is paramount for students to keep respect with their teacher when they are either in school or at home, until they become successful in their career. Universities or schools always select teacher who is more expert in their field that help the student in their subjects. My own story, reveals that, in 10th class there was respected teacher who always helped me through out studies. After few months teacher ranking list became announced, which she were in the top of the list among thousands of teacher. I asked her, could you please tell me about your success, honorably she mentioned that, I never used to share political views during lecture, because this behavior will led the students mind towards not necessary things.
In conclusion, because of aforementioned reasons I feel that teacher should stop political views in the classroom. Using political views or social issue drastically declined students interest regarding subjects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ing lecture, because this behavior will led the students mind towards not necessary...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, second, secondly, so, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06281407035 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57651402766 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0191760637 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9523809524 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278659602785 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089468095613 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703262875362 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197923247974 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348765259733 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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