I agree with the statement and I believe that although today's youth is willing to work for community; they don't find enough time for helping the community members. Additionally, they are too tired to commit anything towards community.
First of all, In this competitive world, every-body has to work hard to achieve their goals. They have to attend colleges, do part-time jobs, etc. This results in very less spare time for themselves as well as for community. For instance, my friend who wants to teach music to small children in our community could not find out enough time to do so, because of his job commitments which takes lot of his time.
Second, After gruesome hours of work at work place or in colleges; people want to relax over the weekend. They are too tired with the work over the week. For example, my friend is too tired on weekends that, he does not leave his home even to spend time with friends and just relaxes at home to overcome his week long tiredness. He do not have enough energy to spend time with the community members.
Finally, Some people might argue that it is very important to take part in community services and few youth are very active. I want to acknowledge in my essay that even though young people do know their responsibility towards their community but they are too packed up with their assignments and work. They need to unwind themselves rather than taking part in community services. Otherwise, it may have bad impact on their health.
To conclude, I posit that youth today have lots of burdens in their life from studying to jobs so they cannot take out enough time for their community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... is willing to work for community; they dont find enough time for helping the commun...
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Line 6, column 333, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...to overcome his week long tiredness. He do not have enough energy to spend time wi...
^^
Line 8, column 99, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun youth seems to be countable; consider using: 'few youths'.
Suggestion: few youths
... to take part in community services and few youth are very active. I want to acknowledge ...
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Line 10, column 91, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'job'.
Suggestion: job
... burdens in their life from studying to jobs so they cannot take out enough time for...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71527777778 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4175844362 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3513070029 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5333333333 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166994999667 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626213397149 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547523109106 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101069678795 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125483755577 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.