It is undebatable that the rapid economic growth over the past decades has brought a lot of changes in our lives. Not only has it improved the facilities and constructions surrounding us, but it also has diminished or even eliminated some living ways that had exerted great influence on us in the past. Taking part in community activities, one of such ways, in my opinion, has been almost abandoned by the younger generation who devote more time on their work, parents and kids.
To begin with, working plays a dominant role in an adult’s life. A recent survey conducted by a prestigious newspaper reveals that 70 percent of people in China work at least 55 hours per week which is far more than the number ruled by law. One of the reasons for the overwork is that young people are compelled by their employers. To be more specific, their bosses threaten to fire those people, who are unable to protest in a country with relatively imperfect rule of law, if they refuse to extend their working hours. Another reason is that they work voluntarily for an extra payment. It is reasonable because the youngsters have to cover the living cost, such as rent, electricity, and food. After a day of work, they probably have no energy and time to serve for their community.
Furthermore, a majority of young people prefer to spend more time with their parents, who desperately desire to be accompanied by their offspring. Compared with the communities, parents have exerted a profound influence on the growth of the young, therefore it is unsurprising that the youth routinely visit their parents’ home on weekends. They can share every moment, like having a meal, sitting in front of the television and watching a movie together, which can further solidify the family bond as well as reduce the stress of the youth accumulated during their daily work.
Of course, their kids are as important as their parents for the youngsters. Since the importance of family education has been recognized by a growing number of adults, they are obliged to stay at home and teach their children some basic principles and knowledge. One may contend that people can free themselves from this work by hiring a tutor. Unfortunately, due to the fact that it is not a small overhead, many parents have no alternative but to accomplish the teaching task on their own in order not to aggravate their financial burden.
From the reasons aforementioned, not only their work but also their households cost most of the time of young people. Therefore it is reasonable that they cannot give enough time to helping their communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... cost most of the time of young people. Therefore it is reasonable that they cannot give ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, at least, of course, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8963963964 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75065198755 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7042130386 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.421052632 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3684210526 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179593883733 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661480969386 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062203563932 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11829327646 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066504482095 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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