In every era there have been people who devoted time and energy to help each other and there also there have been people who were not interested in helping othres. But is it justified to categorize people and blame just one section of the society for not serving their community? Well many people think that today’s generation is careless and irresponsible and is not serving their own population. But I do not concur with this notion for the following reasons.
To begin with, nowadays young people have less time than people in early days. In older time there was not much of competition to survive as it is today. In modern world there is cut throat competition among youths in order to prove themselves and to attain their goals. Hence, they have busy schedule, this may be a reason for not paying as much attention as children used to pay earlier. But that does not mean that they are not intended to serve for example children of martyrs who recently died in Urie by a terrorist attack are being supported by a group of college students. They all have contributed money and have taken the responsibility to bear the expense of their education. Thus, it proves that even now there are people who are serving their community.
In addition, it is not true that all young children in the past used to assist people of their community. There have been many examples where children have killed their own siblings in order to get power and wealth. I can recall one of the incidents that I read in my history book, the famous king Aurangjeb imprisoned his father the great king Shajhan to acquire the reign and kingdom which was very cruel. Therefore, it would be injustice to call one entire generation useless just because of few slothful parsons.
To recapitulate, I want to stress more on this point that though thre are many young children who are not interested or are sluggish to work for the community, it would be unfair to hold responsible the entire young population as there are good and bad people in every century and in every generation. Moreover, having said that the intention is more important than anything else and I believe that the young children definitely want to serve not just their own community people but the whole country as it has been proved by the example given above.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201834862385 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.19495412844 0.158761421928 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107798165138 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0596330275229 0.046263068375 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0596330275229 0.0685040099705 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112385321101 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0481651376147 0.0351676179071 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47533296377 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0412844036697 0.0309702414327 133% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0619266055046 0.0887237588012 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00917431192661 0.0209618222197 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0206422018349 0.0139019557991 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2316.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 405.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71851851852 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.296296296296 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.202469135802 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143209876543 0.174417080927 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0987654320988 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47533296377 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 55.8897153265 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8235294118 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5587078421 48.84282405 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.235294118 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.644075263715 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 44.070442992 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.15328467153 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262872878065 0.300154397459 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106200524211 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0697790038853 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.498378131465 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138461750275 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113849781379 0.114077575197 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503504408197 0.0781384742642 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.41966407144 0.336927656856 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0109235109859 0.067059652881 16% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195332047162 0.210909579961 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273991425916 0.0618886996521 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8870967742 25% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.