TPO 28 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
There's no doubt that education is indispensable in today's world and parents play a significant part when it comes to their kids' education. I totally concur with the statement that parents are now getting more engaged in their children's education than parents were before. I feel this way for certain reasons, which I will endeavor to explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, these days parents are getting involved in their children's education because parents completely understand the fact that teenagers can achieve numerous dreams if they study hard, which was not practical in the past due to a lack of knowledge and no advanced technology. For example, I remember when I got admitted in high college, my parents bought me a laptop. The main reason behind giving me a laptop was their understanding and knowledge of how tough it is getting to search reliable books for research, how time-consuming it is to get a manual dictionary and search for vocabulary words. Due to these concerns, they got me a laptop so they could teach me how it makes everything tranquil. Thanks to my parents who got so much involved in my studies that they knew what hurdle I was going through before.
Furthermore, parents value education nowadays than they did in the past. Many were illiterate so they did not know the importance of education. Parents these days acknowledge and appreciate higher education, as a result of this, they get more and more involved. For instance, about 10 years ago, my cousin Lily wanted to be an Aerospace Engineer. She put her idea in front of her parents. Consequently, Lily's parents could not understand her future field and desire and rejected her plan of becoming an Engineer. Needless to say, if Lily's parents were educated enough, they would have encouraged her to let her in this field. In contrast, 3 years ago, my little brother, John became a Fashion Designer because my parents were educated enough not only to understand his field but they knew about the positive consequences of his future related to this field. Moreover, my parents went way too beyond just to help him with the materials and equipment he needed for his work.
To sum up, guardians nowadays are more included in their children's education than guardians were within the past because they want their kids to achieve something great in this competitive world and also they value and know the importance of education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
Theres no doubt that education is indispensabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9487804878 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7105682522 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514634146341 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3327145186 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.722222222 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287191244017 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101826125123 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105534949162 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202005452561 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789626564462 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.