Nowadays parents have a more vital role in their children's path in every field. One of the critical aspects of children's life is the educational aspect. Parents, as closer people to their children, have more effects on their educational lives. These effects can be positive or even negative. In the following, I present more explanations.
In the past, parents did not had enough monitoring on their children because most of the parents did not appropriate information about educational tasks of their children and in additional they thought it does not matter if their children get best grades in school or not, instead, they considered job as an important feature of their children's life. But today, most of the parents are educational and expert so they want their children to have the better performance in school. Parents spend more time to help children to improve their grade and even teach them some topic of their assignments.
Although I mentioned the positive role of parents but in other hand, they could have bad effects on their children's education. Take me as an example, When I was in high school my parents force me to pursue mathematical field even though I loved to be a doctor. Finally, I accepted their decision but I always regret that because I believe that I could be a remarkable doctor.
Due to emerging new technology, parents are more up to date in comparison to the past. Hence, this situation brings parents more capabilities to help their children because they have enough information to share with them and are familiar with children's demands. The materials of children's book are according to new issues so it could be helpful for parents to keep going with the surge of new technology. In additional, these new devices bring parents convenience ways to encounter with children's education.
In shortly, I aforementioned some reasons that I have to accept this fact that parents are more connected with children's education. Albeit I told it has drawbacks and advantages but in my opinion, its advantages outweigh disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'in addition', 'in short', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243315508021 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.141711229947 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106951871658 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0401069518717 0.046263068375 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.104278074866 0.0685040099705 152% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.131016042781 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0106951871658 0.0351676179071 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.84027718986 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0401069518717 0.0309702414327 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0614973262032 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0106951871658 0.0209618222197 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00267379679144 0.0139019557991 19% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2067.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 342.0 408.028673835 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04385964912 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359649122807 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295321637427 0.251872472559 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204678362573 0.174417080927 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137426900585 0.112833075102 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84027718986 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 51.9794121337 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1176470588 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0333878012 48.84282405 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.588235294 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.644075263715 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 49.6498108015 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.34579439252 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374658849319 0.300154397459 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104532631669 0.103427244359 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0859840926367 0.0752933317313 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553181091249 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130763719262 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15581626251 0.114077575197 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744916994824 0.0781384742642 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.30274202103 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0803574305239 0.067059652881 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238048195581 0.210909579961 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609215927955 0.0618886996521 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.