Nowadays, Technology has significant effect on the human modern life in the last decades. World is changing very quickly and changing the human's perspective about his or her community. At first glance, it seems difficult to draw conclusion about whether or not people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives rather than people who lived in the past. Different people will have different responses to this question based on their own characteristic emotional concern. However, I totally disagree with the following statement. There are several good reasons for my propensity for this issue as rendered herein, and among these factors two conspicuous reasons are: Technology and human's viewpoint .
First and foremost, Technology and science are as high-motivator of the humans to change their lifestyle from traditional lifestyle to modern one. the technology made the world more closer than before. social media made the people closer than before. people can connecting together easily through the communication devices such as cell-phone, internet and so on. for example, my brother live away from me for keeping their study in the America and i live in Iran additionally, I make call him weekly via skype and have video call through the VOIP. By regarding this fact, how far from Iran to America, by just clicking a button i can see my brother online like the face to face communication. unlikely, the past people could not communicate together comfortably if they are located far away. sometimes, the mother had not seen his son or daughter This example clearly shows that how modern life made people more happy and satisfied by changing the world lifestyle.
Second, It is generally agreed today that people have high income rather than past people. Before, people did not have enough money to afford their primary accessories . Moreover, rate of the unemployment was very high. By improving the economic in the last century, governments have appeal to invest more money on the economical project. By establishing the big factories, most of the people was attracted to work there to earn more money. This days, people tend to earn more money and spend it in colorful accessories, electronical devices, smart gadget which technological and economical improvement has blessed it for the human in the 21th century. In addition, according to the research which was conducted in one of the most reputable universities in my country, Iran economic university, more than 80 percents of people spend high rate of their money to new electrical and technological devices and do not have high-propensity to save money to the future. Therefore, this statistics clearly shows that people now are less happy or satisfied with their lives rather than past one.
All in all, if all the aforementioned factors are contemplated, one can readily reach the conclusion that people now are happier and less satisfied than past people. Therefore, not only people are happy and satisfied with their own lives, people get adopt themselves with modern life and have high gratification in their real-life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...icant effect on the human modern life in the last decades. World is changing very...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
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...eems difficult to draw conclusion about whether or not people now are less happy or less satis...
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...ther than people who lived in the past. Different people will have different res...
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...ons are: Technology and humans viewpoint . First and foremost, Technology and sci...
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Suggestion: The
...om traditional lifestyle to modern one. the technology made the world more closer t...
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...n to America, by just clicking a button i can see my brother online like the face...
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...oney to afford their primary accessories . Moreover, rate of the unemployment was ...
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...acted to work there to earn more money. This days, people tend to earn more money an...
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...to save money to the future. Therefore, this statistics clearly shows that people no...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22202166065 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.140794223827 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.120938628159 0.0866891130778 140% => OK
Adverbs: 0.086642599278 0.046263068375 187% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0469314079422 0.0685040099705 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119133574007 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0361010830325 0.0351676179071 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81734082801 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0270758122744 0.0309702414327 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0703971119134 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00902527075812 0.0209618222197 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00902527075812 0.0139019557991 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3105.0 2387.08602151 130% => OK
No of words: 503.0 408.028673835 123% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17296222664 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355864811133 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266401590457 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198807157058 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147117296223 0.112833075102 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81734082801 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497017892644 0.524397521467 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.4035732733 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9583333333 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2821496227 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.375 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9583333333 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.54480286738 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.5984923791 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.375 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484425463318 0.300154397459 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122361216848 0.103427244359 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.127515280067 0.0752933317313 169% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.448217786366 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142099813203 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171492395384 0.114077575197 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815047155134 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.39464373113 0.336927656856 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0496357852906 0.067059652881 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35809310836 0.210909579961 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588359448444 0.0618886996521 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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