In the history of mankind, probably no century has witness more progress in technology, science, cultural norms and that we group under the broad term of 'development' than the 21st century did. Thanks to this increasing developments, significant alterations in people's lifestyle have been brought about. Some might argue that these changes have contributed significantly to less satisfaction and joy of life among people, however, others look through different lens and claim the opposite viewpoint. As far as I am concerned, these discrepancies have root in distinct perspectives one can expect. In consistency with most scholars, I do believe that advancements and fast rate of changes in various aspects of life have culminated with more thriving lives, which satisfies people more than past. In the following paragraphs, I will provide several explanations in favor of this opinion.
In the first place, the life has been facilitated by means of rapid changes in technology. To illuminate this idea, one can posit advancements in industrial fields, where workers are no longer required to perform laborious tasks. In the past times, there were more difficult attempts to fulfill works, people had to work by hands for long hours to accomplish the efforts. These days, machines do most of labors and workers are needed to operate them. This trend provides people to practice more comfortable life, work for less hours a week and have more leisure time to spend. This example amply illustrates that due to more free time to devote to personal life, people are more pleased of their lifestyle.
Moreover, according to multiple researches done in this area, most scholars have it on the highest authority that modern lifestyle in developed societies have made it feasible for people to pursue their incentives. Easy ways of reaching your pursuit will indeed lead into more successful life. When people feel that their goals are accessible and they can put their dreams into reality, they, of course, will deem themselves as happy persons. In most extreme instances, higher education, facilitated transportation, secured job opportunities, safe societies, advanced civilizations providing more liberal conditions and to name but a few, are inevitable corollaries of modernization along fast changing world. These examples depict the status which make the emotional relief possible. The life stress once people experienced belongs to the past. These days, people are more flourishing in the case of emotional feelings.
In conclusion, taking into account abovementioned points, we can reach an agreement that recent developments prevailing in societies have resulted into more convenient life that definitely makes people to be more satisfied with their lives. Therefore, I strongly oppose the statement based on reasonable explanations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...xplanations in favor of this opinion. In the first place, the life has been faci...
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Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the labors') or simply say ''most labors''.
Suggestion: most of the labors; most labors
...sh the efforts. These days, machines do most of labors and workers are needed to operate them....
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Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...ractice more comfortable life, work for less hours a week and have more leisure time to sp...
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Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ractice more comfortable life, work for less hours a week and have more leisure time...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment based on reasonable explanations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, of course, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2408.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46031746032 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93162465292 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607709750567 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7058549528 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17970254511 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519505316666 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03986154172 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116115456685 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128062940149 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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