Governing countries have been the most essencial rule among the politician. a government could be successful with making important decision in a functional approach. Some people belives that spending money and invest on young children help countries to gain a futur prosperous people. However, others asuume that Government should spend money more on universities. In my perspective, investing money on universities is a crucial practic fo adminastrator to get in a developed countries. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following reasons.
First and formost, universities are athe place which creat an environment for studens to have
researched about an important isues which will happen in the countries. If the universities could cover more students, the government would have had a more chance to developed and use the studens in the follwing future of modern and developed countries. Study shows that the moste important sicentific issues have been addresed in the universities bt the student.This result shows that how much is nececery for government to spend more money on universities to prepered the safe and well equipment environment for student who are the key persones for having a better future of life.
Second, The universities are responsible to creat a quantitive environment for teachers and professores. The more universities support teachers the better quaities will gain the teachers. research indicates the level of high qualificatin of the new method of educating had been happen in the countries which the goverments consentrates and invest some parts of their avenues on their universities, which was quiet inspiring.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the statemnt that For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children(five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. I believe that spending money on universities not only creat an environment for student to research on important issues but also creat an atmosphier for teachers to become usefull for their development of their countries.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...st essencial rule among the politician. a government could be successful with mak...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ional approach. Some people belives that spending money and invest on young child...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...esed in the universities bt the student.This result shows that how much is nececery ...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Research
...better quaities will gain the teachers. research indicates the level of high qualificati...
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Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...of the new method of educating had been happen in the countries which the goverments c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34808259587 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12488668097 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483775811209 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4666814488 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444464591914 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155171358999 0.076458572812 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139740900272 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245715254309 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161720210698 0.0645574589148 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...st essencial rule among the politician. a government could be successful with mak...
^
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ional approach. Some people belives that spending money and invest on young child...
^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...esed in the universities bt the student.This result shows that how much is nececery ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Research
...better quaities will gain the teachers. research indicates the level of high qualificati...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...of the new method of educating had been happen in the countries which the goverments c...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34808259587 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12488668097 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483775811209 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4666814488 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444464591914 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155171358999 0.076458572812 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139740900272 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245715254309 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161720210698 0.0645574589148 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.