TPO 37 Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In fact, planning the works which should be done has turned into a controversial issue during recent decades as far as many companies even recruited expert in order to distinct the most appropriate tasks which have to be done in the first priority. In my point of view people prefer to do two kinds of things including entertainment and works that contribute them to achieve goals; therefore, I myself believe that people's plan is definitely different when they encounter with each kind. people would rather to decline the number of things which are done in high quality in the firs situation; moreover, on the contrary they like to participate in many funny things.
Actually, in the second kind of work, goal is counted as a vital factor that people organize their works according to it. Although a vast majority of people like to take advantages of a host number of works, logically they completely focus on the most significant work that helps them to be successful; indeed, the reason of selecting special work not only isn't lack of time but also is the value of time that people don't want to spend it on not wealthy tasks. On the other hand, prosperity can be gained when people do work in high quality, hence, selecting specific things is logical and rational.
Indeed, it is hard to ignore the fact that people nowadays don't have enough time for enjoyable tings such as trips, parties, etc. they lose a lot of throughout doing other essential works; besides, the time is wasted in crowded place. For instance, I have been losing my time every day when i am going to work and backing that doesn’t let me to allocate a specific time to extra interesting activity such as watching film or spending time with friends; actually, both limitation of time and the importance of aims confine us to a finite frame.
Generally, I believe that the fewer quantity the higher quality. For example, employers assign fewer that three work to each worker or students' homework have decreased considerably in comparison past; nonetheless, one cannot neglect the fact that in such the busy world people unconsciously face the lack of time in their time; thus, they are obliged to eliminate some works which have less priority.
- TOEFL TPO 42 - Integrated Writing Task 88
- TPO 37 Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 81
- integrated essay from TPO 16 85
- Essay topics: TPO 19 - Integrated TOEFL essay 86
- TPO 40: Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 489, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
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Line 1, column 579, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'firs'' or 'fir's'?
Suggestion: firs'; fir's
...s which are done in high quality in the firs situation; moreover, on the contrary th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ason of selecting special work not only isnt lack of time but also is the value of t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t also is the value of time that people dont want to spend it on not wealthy tasks. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...to ignore the fact that people nowadays dont have enough time for enjoyable tings su...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...have been losing my time every day when i am going to work and backing that doesn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85564304462 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58630754384 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569553805774 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.9558538854 48.9658058833 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.181818182 100.406767564 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6363636364 20.6045352989 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.0909090909 5.45110844103 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142338858947 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615840372235 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524514264666 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862218823468 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408735603481 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 11.7677419355 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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