TPO 41
"Teachers are inevitable part of every society" said Bernard Russell, one of the brilliant mind through the history. There is no doubt that teachers play an important role in the society, affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question is, however, whether to agree or disagree with this statement has sparked spirited debate among people recently. I am, to a huge extent, disagree with this standpoint. In the ensuing paragraph, I will try to shed some light on my perspective through ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite point to be mention is that it is crystal clear that being a teacher or professor give you a high position in society which is really important for government also they never put teachers in a harsh situation thus always try to make awesome condition for them. For instance, I remember that one time teachers did not satisfy about their salary therefore government as soon as possible solve their problem, hence they never let teachers experience difficulties.
Another point which deserves some words here is that teachers are the backbone of a successful society, thus nobody can deny that if people want to have development country, they have to invest in their children and education because if you do not have reliable teacher, not only you cannot improve yourself, but also you are not beneficial for the future of the country too, so governments try to make some congress every 2 years for teachers to review their knowledge in addition learn about new method of teaching and be aware about technology, thus by this work they can update their information. For instance, when I worked in high school as mathematics teachers, I remember that I went to one of this congress to learn about a new strategy for solving one type of question in addition governments support this event and we did not pay money for it.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at the first glance, but they are no mean the only reasons which available. Actually there is another subtle point which must be born in mind. It should be also noted that television program and newspaper always talk about the crucial duty of teachers and admire them for their effort, by these activities try to encourage them to continue their work as well as they can beside that they want to show them that we respect them and realize that their work is really arduous.
To make a long story short, from all the above mentioned points and reasons, one can safety draw a conclusion that if one weight merits and demerits of the above statements, one soon realize that this day nobody can deny teachers also governments make their effort to support them and show their value in society. That is why I firmly disagree with this standpoint.
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- TPO 49 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2339.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89330543933 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61914409546 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506276150628 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.738254101 48.9658058833 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.071428571 100.406767564 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1428571429 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 11.7677419355 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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