TPO 41-
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By improving civilization human always try to learn new thing to promote quality of their lives. Thus, they have been learning from each other. For instance, learning hunting of animals, make fire and so on. We know who someone teaches everything to others as called teacher and he or she is as a cornerstone of knowledge also this person is very precious for every society. In the past, teachers were more respected by others and society. Inversely, today they have less value than the past unfortunately. I am greatly convinced that instructors were more valued by others and cultures in the past which will be discussed broadly here under.
First, in the past time, many teachers had a high position among people .They always had good place in their hometown and their society. As a matter of fact, some people believe that they were as same as doctors and some groups supposed that they were angel of insight. As far as I can remember “my grandfather said my instructor was my life and as he said I carried out while my parents sometimes were diverged from them”. Therefore, many people assume that teachers had sensitive and significant tasks as if they were goddess of save. Furthermore, they could understand many people need to them and they did not abuse from people and their conditions.
Second,another worth thing mentioning is that, they had one job and their time was allocated to teaching others and they did not do anything. Notwithstanding, they sometimes carried out their personal and daily. As it can be easily seen, when people watched their life could realize teachers were devoted their life to indoctrinate them. Thereby, their value more improved day by day. Unfortunately, today, many teachers are compelled to more job except to main job which this reason maybe sharply reduce education quality. Therefore, one reason that teachers have less respect than the past can be reason.
Last but not least, without any shadow of doubt, teachers have a valuable job which is teaching useful knowledge to others and eventually every society and culture have to respect them because they are foundation of awareness in each culture and society .Therefore, maybe their value and tribute is fluctuated by time but they always respectable group among people. In addition, when they are satisfied with society they can be strongly effective in society’s condition.
To put it in a nutshell, some people believe that teachers more appreciated by people in the past and others have negative attitude .I cast light on first group for it is mentioned above and I assume that in the past time teachers were more respected and they had been an apex in the society .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95584988962 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60095600724 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496688741722 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8673505224 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.904761905 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224608548361 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802843626725 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554800986217 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145979901995 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248508901067 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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