Teacher plays a crucial role for one’s education in the society. Through the whole history, teacher's status has been always precious among people and community. Some argue that teachers are not valued as much as they were in the past. In my opinion, this is true at some extent. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Primarily, taking about the past days, where it was hard to pursue a degree to become a teacher due to low economic situation of almost all the families. At that time, people could not able to afford higher education and adults were forced to start earning at early age rather than continuing their education. My grandfather was a compelling example of this. He was one of the intelligent students in his school and used to get first rank during among all the students, but he left his education after 12th grade because of the poor economic condition of his family. Not only that, but there were many of his friends had the same trouble and they also discontinue their further education. As a result, there were only few who were at the position of teacher and that is one of the reasons, in past, teachers were valued more compared to the present days.
Nowadays, education has become easier compared to the past. Also, people give less preference to teaching field because of the other highly valuable fields, such as medicines and engineering where the salaries are high, and adults would get job quickly as soon as they graduated from the universities. For example, I have graduated in medicine, and one of my school friend completed her bachelor in teaching field. I got a high salary job after a month of my graduation in one of the reputed hospitals in my city, but my friend got her job ten months after her graduation, and comparatively less salary. This is the reason why adults are more inclined toward the other fields, and teaching has become less appreciated field at present days.
Furthermore, with the lightning speed of technological evolution, internet has been widely used for education purpose. Teenagers can explore everything on internet ranging from their E-books, online education classes and online articles from where they get the knowledge as the same level as they get from teacher. For instance, my brother had to study English in order to get good grades in TOEFL. However, he started preparing for English speaking with some native speakers through internet application rather than taking coaching class from professionals. Thus, he could improve his English speaking in more efficient and effective way without paying fees for coaching class. On the contrary, in past days people did not have such options like internet, so they must have to attend coaching class from professional teachers. This is also the reason, teachers were given more respect compared to the present days.
To sum up, I strongly believe that teachers once had a prominent position in society. But due to the dramatically improving education level and technological evolution, teachers are less valued now.
- TPO 30Agree/Disagree: It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. 70
- TPO 32 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO 45- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives 90
- TPO 13 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO 34 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 790, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...teacher and that is one of the reasons, in past, teachers were valued more compared to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2567.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 517.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96518375242 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61023263857 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489361702128 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.0 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0344824604 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.68 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.68 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162712686785 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052465317357 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549938155954 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915446233798 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294258418624 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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