As time passes and people get more developed, they are getting more aware of how education of children is valuable. Importance of upbringing new generation and children is not an ambiguous issue these days, so people tend to find the best methods to teach and grow their children. in and so on, teachers are respectful and appreciated and valued by society as well as before or even more than before on account of reasons, three of which are as follows:
The most important reason is that, according to researches in psychology, conducted in recent decades, the most important period of life, which human personality is shaped, is childhood. Children, after reaching the age to attend school, spend huge portion of their time with their teachers. So teachers have great influence in the most important period of life of children and any delinquency from them can result in terrible problems in educating and upbringing new generation. For example, many researches have been conducted by psychologists which illustrate, almost all of criminals, have had problems during their childhood, which some of them were related to schools and teachers.
Secondly, applying standard and scientific methods of teaching different courses to children, have been proved to be so important to create an efficient education system. These changes, caused teaching to turn into a hard job ,and takes experts and well skilled teachers to undertake this responsibility. For example, but nowadays, different methods have been suggested for teaching each course, and teachers are expected to have ability to utilize these methods to maximize the efficiency of teaching process.
Furthermore, it has been becoming more common to have fewer children recently. This is because of increase in people expectations of life, nowadays, quality of life and self-satisfaction is prefered by people. People tend to have one or two children, and rarely happens a family to have more than two children. This attitude resulted parents to be much more careful about upbringing and educating their fewer children. As a result, they are more cautious about the teachers of their children.
In summary, with all this taken into account, it has been proven that teaching is one of the most important roles in our societies, and can have great influence in shaping of personality and abilities of children and next generation. People are amazingly cognizant of the mentioned fact. As result, nowadays, teachers are appreciated and valued by society even more than they were in the past.
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
- TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when the 80
- Artificially intelligent robots are increasingly taking human jobs. Some people believe that eventually all work will be done by robots while others believe that there will be a limit to the tasks that robots can perform. 85
- TPO-43 - Independent Writing Task Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wa 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...thods to teach and grow their children. in and so on, teachers are respectful and ...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... caused teaching to turn into a hard job ,and takes experts and well skilled teach...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bout the teachers of their children. In summary, with all this taken into acc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in summary, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25916870416 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83357311578 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476772616137 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1493708095 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.529411765 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0588235294 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125167113487 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558481735496 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892664655905 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882154463976 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057971977894 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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