Satisfaction of workers in a company can lead the company to manufacture better products which can bring more financial profit for the owners. Business experts suggest many methods to keep the workers satisfied and among them, the kinds of the tasks that workers have to do every day are so controversial. Germane to this fact, a question that is matter of debate is whether doing various responsibilities during a workday makes the worker pleased more than doing the same task or not. Although it might not be accepted by all, I am, personally, on the belief that doing different types of works a day can help workers to be more satisfied.
One compelling reason deserving to be mentioned is that it is much more enjoyable to do different duties over the workday. Psychologically speaking, after doing the same work over a long period of time, everyone definitely will get bored with that work, even if they like it too much. Doing the same task all day long not only can have a negative effect on the workers, but also it can increase the risks of doing the duties incorrectly which can cause severe damage to the company sometimes. A vivid example can shed more light on the issue. I, personally, love mechanical engineering and after I graduated, I got a job in a famous engineering firm. Everything was right until several months passed and I started thinking what I was doing all day long. It was the same duty I had to do every day throughout working hours. Surprisingly, after a few months I found myself hating mechanical engineering only because I had to carry out something all over again and again. Consequently, I decided to never do the same work ever again.
Another reason substantiating my stance which is equally important, if not more, is that doing different duties while working can satisfy the feeling of being important among the workers. To elaborate, employees want to be needed and feel that what they do is significant and noticeable for the company. Therefore, having different responsibilities in the working area provides the worker with this emotion and as a result, they perform better.
To recapitulate, doing a variety of tasks everyday can be much more pleasing for the workers and based of the reasons stated above, it can be more profitable for the companies to have satisfied workers. Although it might not be agreed by all, I strongly recommend the managers to try giving the workers different duties to keep them satisfied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
..., after doing the same work over a long period of time, everyone definitely will get bored wit...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... recapitulate, doing a variety of tasks everyday can be much more pleasing for the worke...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.181818181818 0.229887763892 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.190476190476 0.158761421928 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0887445887446 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0822510822511 0.046263068375 178% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0541125541126 0.0685040099705 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103896103896 0.118717715034 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0606060606061 0.0351676179071 172% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82131968985 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0367965367965 0.0309702414327 119% => OK
Particles: 0.0021645021645 0.00188951952338 115% => OK
Determiners: 0.108225108225 0.0887237588012 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0281385281385 0.0209618222197 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012987012987 0.0139019557991 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2471.0 2387.08602151 104% => OK
No of words: 422.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85545023697 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331753554502 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248815165877 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163507109005 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116113744076 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82131968985 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509478672986 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 57.1564558525 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4444444444 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7787772152 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.277777778 120.699889404 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.644075263715 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 48.3259610321 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.05960264901 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338302940827 0.300154397459 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110741347831 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0598922111669 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.502499560725 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15998046243 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132331200501 0.114077575197 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709572304424 0.0781384742642 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.40525666593 0.336927656856 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0620534281742 0.067059652881 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248947228051 0.210909579961 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440479689424 0.0618886996521 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.