tpo-42-Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Workers have a important effect in the factories. There is an Iranian proverb which says, the workers do the job and produce. While most people think that worker should have many different types of tasks to do to be fulfill, personally I believe that they should do similar tasks all day long. The reasons for my choice are manifold, among which efficiency and time are the most paramount ones.
First, I think that all of the workers goal is make money. So it is important do well as they can. If they learn a task very good and they would be professional, it is great that they can do their best in that job and no need to change it. In this way they would have high efficiency, thus the boss feel satisfy. The conclusion is the worker working for long time in the factory by hish efficiency and productivity. As a personal experiment, I was work in a electronic factory as a quality manager. One of my duties was measuring the efficiency and productivity of the woekers. I saw all of the workers love to have a high productivity to show their ability in their tasks. We test some werkers in the task which were not their specialization. After a while they can not reach to the high productivity in previous task and they were dissatisfied.
Additionaly, changing task cause waste the time of the worker and factory. The workers should learn many things about the new job and also the company should spend many time, energy and money for them. The result is high expectation. This usually suffer the workers.
As a conclusion, personally I believe that it is better for both worker and employer to most of the workers do only one certain task during the workday for reasons including efficiency, time and expectation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61889250814 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67093429622 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485342019544 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3813741472 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6315789474 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47368421053 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325327724119 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910332403798 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907588975584 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199711233087 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870537895703 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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