Everyone of us different from each other in our thoughts and believes so according to individual personality the way of reacting to instant will change. Some of us want react immediately then and there no matter what consequence we are going to face. And, some of us react according the present situation whether it appropriate or not. Some, leaves the matter just like that they do not remember that particular instant.
First of all, everyone knows that there is some manner should be followed that we cannot denial it. Because we are in society, we are supposed to follow the norms that is nothing but expected behavior on must follow in the community. So, I would like choose the option which is when my teacher or leader become cool then I will explain things to them like sir/madam you're opinion about me is wrong because of so on reasons. May be perception was different during that time but I am not actually like that.
Secondly, for ever action there will be equal and opposite reaction as well. If, we are cool and calm on our action then reaction from the teacher/ leader will be cool way. For example, some teacher said that that student opinion is wrong, if, react immediately then he may be lose his grade in the exam. But, if, he cool and explain about himself later then teacher also will have good opinion on him and teacher will correct his/her mistakes later.
Thirdly, good relation can be maintained by only calm way not in radical way. When, we expressing our opinion while they are in peaceful mind then result will be positive for us. On other hand radical way end up with conflicts between the students and the teacher which not fruitful for students. For example, someone concept was regarding some maths problem but teacher refused it. Once, they teacher become relaxed mind if we are explaining to her the she might be appreciated you're talent and you can have reciprocal relationship with higher authority. If, he/she takes radical way there will be cold war between teacher and students.
Finally, mistake happens it is very common no one is correct in this world, we are human being. We must follow the courteous, should not hurts other feeling while giving our opinions. So, as a student one should follow good healthy way while approaching teacher regarding when small conflicts rises between them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...l explain things to them like sir/madam youre opinion about me is wrong because of s...
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lain things to them like sir/madam youre opinion about me is wrong because of so ...
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Line 8, column 349, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'later than'?
Suggestion: later than
..., if, he cool and explain about himself later then teacher also will have good opinion on ...
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Line 8, column 355, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...he cool and explain about himself later then teacher also will have good opinion on ...
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Line 10, column 346, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'maths'' or 'math's'?
Suggestion: maths'; math's
...ple, someone concept was regarding some maths problem but teacher refused it. Once, t...
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Line 10, column 451, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'she'?
Suggestion: the; she
...elaxed mind if we are explaining to her the she might be appreciated youre talent and y...
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Line 10, column 480, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ing to her the she might be appreciated youre talent and you can have reciprocal rela...
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Line 13, column 138, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'hurt'
Suggestion: hurt
...e must follow the courteous, should not hurts other feeling while giving our opinions...
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Line 13, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ther feeling while giving our opinions. So, as a student one should follow good health...
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Line 13, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hen small conflicts rises between them.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.174496644295 0.229887763892 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.176733780761 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0872483221477 0.0866891130778 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0782997762864 0.046263068375 169% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0872483221477 0.0685040099705 127% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118568232662 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0402684563758 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37804567146 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0134228187919 0.0309702414327 43% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00447427293065 0.00188951952338 237% => OK
Determiners: 0.0626398210291 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0425055928412 0.0209618222197 203% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0156599552573 0.0139019557991 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2358.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 404.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83663366337 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336633663366 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25495049505 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148514851485 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0792079207921 0.112833075102 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37804567146 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522277227723 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.3978719229 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2380952381 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5127569591 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.644075263715 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.733144743 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 0.97385620915 1.45489161554 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303659948035 0.300154397459 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109197865016 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0720591134591 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491983588791 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0915858708906 0.151897553556 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104381888431 0.114077575197 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702903338297 0.0781384742642 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.273119646084 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0723628438286 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191366964539 0.210909579961 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506322296714 0.0618886996521 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.