TPO 45. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
As it is obviouse, the world is changing quickly, and it is compeletly affected by the fast growing scince and technology, also it has changed the way of the living. Some people belive that in the past youth were independed to their parents to make decisions; however, by passing the time, they depend more to their parents guide. Reversly, I think that today young people are better able to make their own decisions because not only are parents cannot help them like what happend in the past, but also nowadays youth are more aware about the new complicated world.
The first reason which should be stated here is that today parents are very busy. The complex jobs have occupied the most of the parents life. Also, they should work hard to earn enough money for their life. Some of them may be forced to work more than ten hours a day. As they are busy with their career, they do not have enough time to be concered about their children and help the children to make the plans for the future. While, in the past the careers were so simple, and there were no such complicated technologies. Therefore, the parents were able to conduct their youth.
The other point which deserves some words here is that today youth are aware about their environment. They can access to any kind information just by searching it on the internet. Also, today most of the youth have academic degrees which shows their ability and knowledge in a specific field. In addition, there are various centers with high educated professors who can guide the youth for planning. By this toold the young people will be able to make their decisions better. On the contrary, in the past there were no such tools to hepl and inform youth for making decisions, so they were more dependent to their parents.
To summarize, Today youth can get their decisions better that past. nowadays parents are more busy and do not have enough time to conflict with the youth concerns. In addition, thanks to new proceed developments, the youth can use various sources of information to get hepl for their questions and problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...plex jobs have occupied the most of the parents life. Also, they should work hard to ea...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...n get their decisions better that past. nowadays parents are more busy and do not have e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72328767123 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30069461718 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47397260274 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5957448154 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7368421053 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351712890909 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116804115269 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112068375402 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238503446272 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688413610855 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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