Over the last few decades, many things in the world have changed which have greatly impacted our lives such that our current lifestyle differs from the lifestyle of our parents in many aspects. One of the paramount aspects is independence which many people believe that today's young people are not much dependent on their parents like the past and they make important decisions by themselves. I strongly agree with this statement regarding children become more independent than before due to two compelling reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First and foremost, in recent years, educational systems have changed a lot and try to prepare children to real life, one of the utmost topics which student learn about in the school is independence, children taught how to make a decision and consider the positive and negative aspects of their decisions. The children also taught by the school about how to work and earn some money furthermore how to manage their money in the young age in order to prevent from being embroiled into financial crises due to the difficulty which they will experience in the future.
Another interesting point which deserves some word is that self-confidence is another prominent reasons which make people feel positive about themselves and take risks on their lives by making their own decisions.
Another significant point which should take into consideration is that in past people preferred to live in a joint family where all member of the family such as parents, children, and grandparents lived with harmony and peace under the one roof, one the other hand these days the culture of living nuclear is much more common. This culture has deleterious effects on children’s decision so that in time of making a prompt decision none of the members of the family exist around the child so he/she has to make the decision by himself. For example, when I graduated from the high school I hesitated between civil engineer and architecture, therefore, I ended up with a civil engineer so after a while I really hate that major because I didn’t consult with my family. If I had asked my family to help me with this decision, I would never have been experienced terrible things.
Due to the aforementioned discussion explored in the previous statements, although parents are the main role model of their children and children are more influenced by their parents but they are more likely to make their decision by themselves.
- In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? 76
- Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smart phone, video games, for fun and entertainment. Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development. 78
- For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 840, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have never been
... to help me with this decision, I would never have been experienced terrible things. Due to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01941747573 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71009900728 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3116449252 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.0 100.406767564 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4545454545 20.6045352989 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292672036709 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115579818322 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973133966182 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168373348901 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444440186937 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 11.7677419355 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 58.1214874552 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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