There are some considerations or factors which everyone can take into account to investigate and examine younger person's thinking. I certainly do not agree that the opinions of celebrities are more valuable to youth. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The descriptions go as follows.
Firstly, younger people have other priorities and difficulties to pay attention. These days, all youngsters ought to study enough hard to understand the materials and topics which have been covered in the classes. Sometimes, it takes long hours to do their assignments or math problems. In this circumstance, it is vividly clear that there is no any free time to devote for celebrities' opinions. In other world, schoolwork has a higher priority compared to know about famous athletes’ view. In contrast, older people, after daily occupation, have an adequate time and hence more motivation to follow their rule model or well-known athletes’ opinion.
Furthermore, modern technology changes youngsters’ attitude towards the life. Nowadays, the world alters very swiftly and all human experience a huge advancement and improvement in several fields of science and engineering like transportation, communication, health caring, and artificial intelligence. This practical and theoretical progress not only changes mankind’s physical world but also alters young people's idea toward the universe, creation, and life. In fact, youngsters now are more interested to keep the pace with modern inventions including smarts phones and computers rather than celebrities' thinking. However, older persons prefer to avoid from new technologies and give attention to famous entertainers.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that the ideas of celebrities are more valued by young persons. Chiefly, famous entertainers are the symbols of wealth, power, and luxury, and all youngsters have a more tendency to follow celebrities’ viewpoints compared to the older ones. However, still I affirm that the opinions of celebrities are not more important for youngsters. Although youngsters have some tendencies towards the celebrities, these attractions and inclinations are not significant. Besides, for youngsters now, scientific people and engineers are the signs of money and power.
Due to aforementioned ground, all folk should bear in mind that the thinking of famous entertainers are not very prominent to youngsters. Participation of time and technology are two prime and conspicuous supports.
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