Nowadays, many events are happening all around the world in less than twenty-four hours. These events, on the other hand have many significant effects on people's life. Although people have consensus on the fact that many events are happening in less than a few hours in different part of the world, there is a controversy among them whether it is necessary to know about them or not.
To begin with, it should be mentioned that people are dealing with a world occupied by technology. Accordingly, technology advancement has provided people with the ease of communication. Consequently, as communication develops, it exposes more people to the results of others' activities not only for local scenarios, but also for international one. In this manner, people will be dictated by this exposure to know better about what is going on in different countries.
The second point is that if modern life is going to be more complicated, then it will experience drastic changes, specially in the fields of politics, economy, and science. Furthermore, as the time passes, these fields grow significantly and they play major roles in different countries and societies relationships. As a result, the more people know about these events in their surrounding environment, the the more wisely they will be able to interact with its complexity.
Finally, it is wothwhile to be noted that as population increases in the world, the probability of interaction of its members grows critically. Thanks to the improvements acheived in medical science and food provision, the need for knowing and solving the problems of different countries acurately is being met. For instance, many countries exports food or medicine to other countries and import other necessary goods from them. Thus, in order to provide a country with its needs properly demands a precise appreciation of the events which are happening all around the world.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it necessary to know about events happening around the world, because of three fundamental which are technology advancement, complexity of modern life, and population growth and its side effects, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, second, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2761627907 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00242009606 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1270708659 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2666666667 5.45110844103 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199353476473 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700851126305 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503803375384 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117721111305 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265329200142 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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