In these days, many events occurred around the world. A question that might arise with respect to this fact is whether we must know about all about this events or do the opposite. In this way, not only these events effect on our lives indirectly, but also we can prepare ourselves for how we can react to some kinds of same events.
That these happenings effect on our lives indirectly can be regarded as a persuasive reason to be explained. Strictly speaking, every occurrence on the world has many beneficial and consequences which effect on all of the world directly or indirectly. All the world live together and this is an important fact that we stick together in many sources. To elucidate it, an enormous earthquake occurs in Turkey. When this news shows on TV, all people of Iran prepare themselves for another earthquake which probably shake them properties. Although the earthquake happened on Turkey, the slates of Iran ranges might be vibrated.
Another reason which is equally important, if not more, is that preparing ourselves for the best react that we can show to this happened if it occurs in our territory. Generally Speaking, every happened might be occurred for us in the future. Delving further into the issue reveals that if this problem occurs to us, we will be totally prepared for it. To give an illustration, if a rubbery happens to our friends house, we use more restriction tools for our entry and windows of our home.
All details considered, i am convinced that the big effects of world events should take precedence over the other option. However, this fact might not be overgeneralized to all condition. Undoubtedly, there are so many small events which does not effect on their lives. This is why it is highly recommended the experts contemplate on what news must published scrupulously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...is whether we must know about all about this events or do the opposite. In this way,...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ficial and consequences which effect on all of the world directly or indirectly. All the w...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...red for it. To give an illustration, if a rubbery happens to our friends house, we use mo...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...f our home. All details considered, i am convinced that the big effects of wo...
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Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...are so many small events which does not effect on their lives. This is why it is highl...
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Line 7, column 374, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... what news must published scrupulously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91290322581 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71648338812 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4508678394 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5882352941 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974537320211 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375992267963 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399907228744 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670273742927 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377892430453 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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