When it comes to planning for the future, people in general believe that it is beneficial if planning early. Some even prepare plan B and plan C if their original plan fails. On the other hand, quite a few people argue that due to the mercurial reality, planning future seems a waste of time. Even though plans may not keep up with reality, people still need to organize their future.
Certainly people will not always follow their plans since the reality changes all the time. However, people still need a plan in order to guide them for achieving short-term goals. My first day in the current job, I have the ambition of learning more knowledge and obtaining the promotion from a contractor to a regular employee. I worked hard to learn new knowledge in my new job, such as studying to develop an internal-used tool using Visual C++ language, which I have never heard before. Hence, I not only study the language during my lunch time in the office, I also study in my personal time in the weekends. With extra efforts and diligence, I met the schedule and successfully developed this tool. Yet I did not transfer from a contractor to a regular employee in the end. On the other hand, I did learn a new skill of developing a Visual C++ application. In other words, without the plan and ambition of obtaining the position of regular employee, I would not have the motivation to achieve my goal of learning new knowledge from my job.
Moreover, with the gradual awareness of internationalism, people nowadays realize that they have to compete not only within the country, but also with the whole planet. It is common to know that students in China and India work particularly hard in order to earn money or have a promising future. As a student, parents and teachers always motivate me with the counterpart student in India and China throughout my childhood. As a result, whenever I feel frustrated and harbored the thought of giving up, I think of their words again. Their words did serve as a motivation to urge me to work even harder since it is possible that I will compete with those students one day. Thus, if I quit, I were not qualified to compete with them. I knew what my goals were, as diligent as China and India students. Eventually, with my goal and hardworking, I entered into a prominent college.
Accordingly, people should not hesitate to organize and plan their future.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'i feel', 'i think', 'in general', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211087420043 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.149253731343 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0831556503198 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0660980810235 0.046263068375 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0852878464819 0.0685040099705 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121535181237 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0298507462687 0.0351676179071 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65595585009 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0341151385928 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00426439232409 0.00188951952338 226% => OK
Determiners: 0.0874200426439 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0106609808102 0.0209618222197 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00852878464819 0.0139019557991 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2387.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 421.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66983372922 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308788598575 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244655581948 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173396674584 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0950118764846 0.112833075102 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65595585009 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503562945368 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.1901104651 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1363636364 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7205193338 48.84282405 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1363636364 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.863636363636 0.644075263715 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 43.6019218311 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.20567375887 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313140578259 0.300154397459 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0997049102179 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0649264223987 0.0752933317313 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.465142239686 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173030239446 0.151897553556 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115490117018 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500308797015 0.0781384742642 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.29151443006 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0843437216286 0.067059652881 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220785289471 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299180661581 0.0618886996521 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.