From the past few years, life has changed dramatically. In this pace of change, there is fervor debate that youngster should have ability to plan and organize in order to meet their goals. Some people believe that it is not so necessary for youngster to come up with plan, whereas some people argue that young people must come up with new scheme. Youngster, in my opinion, should have ability to plan and organize due to ensuing reasons.
To begin with, world, nowadays, is becoming small due to advent of cutting-edge technology in transportation and communication. So there are various factors and various person which can cause impact on other people. For example, breach of trade relationship with countries such as United states and China can cause people unemployment, even though many people may be indirectly related to it. Thus to prevent such tribulation, young people should know about the current events, make a plan according to what is happening around the world, so they can perform any endeavor efficiently and successfully. For example, my cousin Ram wanted to open a fancy store, he discussed with me along with many friends and family members, because he have to come up with plan to make his undertaking go smoothly. So we consulted about various trade relation between India and China, which route to take and means of transportation while moving the items. In fact, making a plan and ability to organize according to it, made such task to undertook so smoothly while compared to other peers without any efficient plan.
Moreover, increased competition may be another reason to encourage youngster to come up with plan. As we know, with increase in population, there is increase in sense of competitiveness among young people. Many youngster try hard to get lucrative jobs position. So in order to out compete these competitors, one have to think smartly, make an efficient plan and organized it in a feasible way. There is a maxim " try not harder, but think smarter". We can see, for example, many bank, now, are coming up with new policy and plans to uplift their growth because there are too high number of Banks in Nepal. The bank who plans more efficiently is more likely to go through the success.
Third, The increase in knowledge among the youngster may cause youngster to summon the plan. Through the use of internet, people can gain vast knowledge about any entrepreneurship or business. So, If you are planning to business, then
why not to look through the various web sites which enable our capacity. It is like giving valuable information in a cheaper way. Thus, if other are using these knowledge for their endeavor, then one naive youngster must also use such knowledge so he can maintains the standard, gained by his peer.
In conclusion, Some people believe not to come with organized plan for youngster, but I don't. Due to increase in competition, various influencing factors and increased knowledge among people, young people are required to come up with plan. Therefore, I insist youngsters should have an ability to come up with scheme and also have capacity to organize the scheme,
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion: tries
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Suggestion: many banks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, third, thus, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 52.1666666667 176% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2623.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97722960152 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73438024647 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495256166983 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.0 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3848945963 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.884615385 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2692307692 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200873571046 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059833943822 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453138105453 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116251837884 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596635004046 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.