TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends
Without a shadow of the doubt, good friends play a vital role in human's life. Good friends can trust each other with their lives. Some people contend that the ability to keep friendships with a small number of people over a long preriod of time is more important for happiness, while others assert that the ability to make new friends easily is better characteristic to have it. Both of the opposing arguments appear to be somewhat convincing and stand to point. However, my personal experience and actual observation of life have led me to agree that the ability of making new friends is more important. In the ensuing lines, I delve into my reasons to substantiate my point.
The first and possibly the paramount reason is that by making new friends we can meet with differentpeople and broaden our horizon. Pesronally believe that people must make new friends to enhance their abilities such as dealing with different people. Entering universities is a so much promising step into a world of opportunities and one of these opportunities is making new friends. Making new friends means we can communicate with different people and obtain experiences alongside with our communication. Also, we can learn new things from new friends. For example, when I entered university I met a new person who was perfect in playing guitar. Eventually, after a week we were friends and she taught me playing guitar. As you can see, the ability of making new friends is very important.
Another point springing to mind is that always there is a possibility that we leave our home to a new destination or our friends leave their house to go to another part of the worls. So, we have to learn how we can make new friends. For instance, my family and I have decided to migrate to another country and because of that we cannot see our dear friens for a long time. If we cannot make new friends, life will be taugh. As a result, because every situation in the life is temporary like our friends, the ability of making new friends can ease our life. I think new friends bring us happiness moments.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that the ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long time is more important since they can spend most of their free time with together. However, I affirm that the ability of making new friends is better because by going to another part of a city or country we can lose our access to our friends. So, the benfits of maintaining friendships can be neglected compared to making new friends.
To sum it all up, it is easy to see the advantages of having the ability to making new friends. By, making new friends we can learn a lotof things and also by moving from our houses we need new friends. I hope everyone can have a precious friend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...at the ability to keep friendships with a small number of people over a long preriod of time is m...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...he ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long time is more importa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64989939638 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65120302698 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444668008048 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2004693666 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8846153846 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1153846154 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57692307692 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319681441271 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107422114083 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952452248088 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21952937106 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839294009657 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.