TPO 44 - Integrated Writing Task
The passage describes that silver coins belonged to Europian was discoverd at a archeaological site in the Main. Many people suppose these coins originally brought to North American by foreign people, while others not.The researchers that believed these coins are fake provide three reasons for supporting their theories. However, the lecture rejects all these reasons by stating that these coins are belonged to European people.
First, the reading states that great distance is a convincing reason that we accept that these coins do not hace historical value. While the professor rejects this theory by expaining that except these coins there are a lot of other tools that discoverd in this fields. Also, the professor states that native people are interested into new things and probably these coins are one of them. On the other hand, long distanse is not a convincing reason.
Second, the reading asserts that, there are no other coins on that fields. However, the talk describes that tehre is a possibility that European people came back to their own country and they left nothing. So,these silver coins are among that objects. As you can see, the professor rejects this idea.
Finally, the passage claims that silver coins were valuable in Europe at that time, while native Americans did not know about that. So, the idea of considering these as money is not convinsing. However, the lecture rebuts this idea by stating that silver coins were veru beautiful and brilliant. As a result native people can use them as jweleries like necklesses. Also, the Eueopean people can utilize from these cois for trading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s belonged to Europian was discoverd at a archeaological site in the Main. Many p...
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Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...can by foreign people, while others not.The researchers that believed these coins a...
^^^
Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ese coins do not hace historical value. While the professor rejects this theory by ex...
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Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... a lot of other tools that discoverd in this fields. Also, the professor states that...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , these
...ir own country and they left nothing. So,these silver coins are among that objects. As...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10943396226 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3878653715 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9019968945 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.625 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343239713228 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11683015936 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777989211434 0.0662205650399 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21923772581 0.162205337803 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485371931412 0.0443174109184 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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