TPO 5: Do you Agree/Disagree.
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment -doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this world, there are things that can not be replaced; and this makes them priceless. Time is one of them. Accepting this, it becomes clear that one should spend this precious gift as best as one can. I accept that, unfortunately, there are many people who spend their time doing what they like to do, instead of devoting it to valuable activities. In my opinion, this is a wrong route to take because of the demerits of this way of life which are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, people do not worry about their health enough. In fact, taking care of their body is not a priority for them. Today, the majority of people are somehow addicted to eating fast foods instead of healthy and organic nutrients. This addiction directly affects one’s health by causing blood pressure or heart problems, to name but a few. Furthermore, people are used to hanging around with their friends in the streets. Doing so, they are losing the chance to work out in a gym or park. Consequently, they will get fat and suffer the disorders resulted by that. Moreover, Using cars instead of public transportation, people are harming themselves; as more cars mean more air pollution and more problems concerning one’s body, especially one’ lungs. Therefore, valuing one’s health results in nothing but benefits.
In addition, people do not manage their free times appropriately. Most of them are attached to the social media and receive useless information rather than reading books which will improve their attitudes. Also, people devote an enormous part of their time to watching television and movies. No one is against watching a good film; however, the problem emerges when a person reduces their resting time in order to watch TV; and will unnoticeably lose their working efficiency and concentration. Furthermore, people nowadays are ignoring their families in their free times. They spend a lot of time doing previously mentioned activities, like hanging around with friends; as a result, they do not have enough time to devote to their family. This is a bad habit as one’s family is where one can solve problems and communicate with people who care for one the most.
To sum it up, people should reconsider their actual habits in their lives. As mentioned above, there are two alternatives to be taken in order to improve one's life habits. In my perspective, people will benefit more by taking care of their health as well as spending their free times in a better way. There is a famous quote saying that: “Time is gold!”. However, I think that time is gold only when it is used in the correct way.
- TPO 5: Do you Agree/Disagree.People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment -doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO 14: Do you Agree/Disagree.People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO 12: Do you Agree/Disagree.It is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 97
- TPO 25 - Do you Agree/Disagree.Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 90
- TPO 17: Do you Agree/Disagree.Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...natives to be taken in order to improve ones life habits. In my perspective, people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92633928571 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66193400704 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533482142857 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0973337634 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8846153846 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213734097406 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677629474385 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912275746816 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13808133084 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507455195151 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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