TPO 53 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Depending on personal experience and the circumstance people lived, some one consider that government need to spend money to improve Internet access meanwhile others hold the entirely different idea which government should pay more attention to public transportation. From my point of view, it can’t draw a conclusion in haste, the decision of finance should depends on the real condition of the country, developed or developing.
For one thing, to a developed country with perfect infrastructure, government usually pay more money for developing relatively high level facilities such as Internet access. With no doubt that better Internet provides more convenient life style. For example, with the development of Internet, students can seek for useful materials everywhere by many kinds of approach, businessman can receive the first-hand information, people can book the ticket of plane or train and make a reservation in advance so that they will avoid many unnecessary troubles.
However, in a developing country, the development of infrastructure is always at the forefront of leader’s mind. Transport infrastructure is one of the most important factors for a country's progress. High density transport infrastructure and highly connected networks are commonly associated with high levels of development. When transport systems are efficient, they provide economic and social opportunities and benefits that result in positive multipliers effects such as better accessibility to markets, employment and additional investments. For example, China, the biggest developing nation with over a billion population. Compared to the west of China, eastern China is more developed because of high level of transportation. It’s more attractive for worker to find job, for investor to input their capital.
In conclusion, why do I disagree with the statement that it is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation? With the perfect facilities, it’s more sensible for developed country to emphasize the improvement of Internet access. Nevertheless, developing country need to spend more money on construction of infrastructure because of relatively poor condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...ence and the circumstance people lived, some one consider that government need to spend ...
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Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'depend'
Suggestion: depend
...n haste, the decision of finance should depends on the real condition of the country, d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83333333333 4.8611393121 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29856384143 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5354721609 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301546298334 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114165164655 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13583931473 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211983379774 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13017942484 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 10.9000537634 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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