In this set of materials, the reading passage mainly discusses about elephants strange life and mentions some points about it such as their death,paint drawing, and scaring from mice, While in the listening passage the professor casts doubt on what presented in the text. First of all, in the reading passage, it is clearly stated that elephants can recognize their death which impel them to live alone during last days of their life near the water. However, the professor believes that this is not true.She claims that this behavior has a logical cause that is difficulty in eating and they prefer to use soft vegetables which are found near water. In addition, the professor disagrees with this idea that elephants can draw a picture without any train from people. She points out that elephants can get this ability from people who teach them with special ways such as making connection which their ears and elephants memorize some simple things shapes like flowers or other animals. Finally, although in the text is mentioned that elephants always scare from mice, the professor subscribes to the view that this behavior is occurred because they are not familiar with mice in their environment. She brings an example about this frightening which is about elephants in the zoo that they do not scare from mice because they are be in touch with them and for this reason they can recognize mice are not dangerous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , paint
...some points about it such as their death,paint drawing, and scaring from mice, While i...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 505, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
...rofessor believes that this is not true.She claims that this behavior has a logical...
^^^
Line 1, column 1330, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...do not scare from mice because they are be in touch with them and for this reason ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, while, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91631799163 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34505297853 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548117154812 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5725995159 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.857142857 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1428571429 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109710115119 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609520484583 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233981912434 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109710115119 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 11.7677419355 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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