tpo53/ do you agree or disagree, that the governments should spend more money to improve internet access more than improving public transportation.
In this modern life which technology is changing rapidly, internet access is a matter of importance to every society which the responsible government plays a key role to improve it. In my point of view, developing internet access is a significant issue which is of a lasting impact on our education and job opportunity.
First, of course internet access is of a strong influence on education. These days holding online courses has become prevalented among institutes. In addition, recently because of corona virus and restrict roles for quarantine, all schools are
closed
, therefore, classes are held online. In this case, internet access plays a crucial role among teachers and students to convenience of study. Besides, nearly all people who are interested in continue their education are extremely busy to present in classes, so is a better idea to take part in online classes instead of going to universities. In this situation, we expect the powerful government devote money to improve internet access. For instance, one of my friends wanted to prepare for the TOEFL exam, but all institutes were
closed
. She took online course and two mock tests to prepare for this exam.
Second, internet access help some people to create job opportunity. Today, people working out of home will become exhausted when they arrive at home. they prefer staying at home, and taking a rest, as a result, go shopping bothers them. In one side, recently, some online shopping pages have created on social media which people can stay at home, lie on the sofa, surf the net and buy their favorite items by one click. it is beneficial for two types of people, sellers to make money, and people who do not want to spend their time and money in shopping malls. For example, my sister has a page on Instagram in which sells her handmade items.
Although some people believe that, the government should spend money to develop public transportation, I firmly believe internet access plays a vital role in any society thanks to the education and job vacancy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99707602339 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61936349191 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8274725239 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.529411765 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165189014078 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555614776112 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071322054911 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852847405996 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573641461855 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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