In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
It is generally agreed upon that the arrival of automobile industry has led to a source of great comfort and performance. With this in mind, there are opposing view about the number of cars in the new twenty years in comparison to that of the present time. While some believe that it stands to the reason that the number of cars will be decreased in new twenty years, others hold the opposite view. I personally subscribe to the first view for many reasons, three of the most substantial of which are discussed in below.
The most compelling reason is that nowadays, everybody, as it commonly perceived, has to be in a rush so as to not to be left behind in contending for "the field of competition"; therefor, managing time plays a pivotal role in one's life. Unfortunately, in today's modern world, traffic congestion is one of the major concerns of human beings. They often spend most of their time sitting in their cars and waiting to get rid of the exhausted traffic, the time that they can exploit it in an excellent fashion. The more the number of cars increases, the more the streets are crowded. Enlarging producing cars without paying attention to the architecture of cities and streets, which have been expanded vertically instead of horizontally so as to ease transportation, has aggravated the traffic dilemma. Consequently, in order to solve this trouble, governments are required to pass a law has to do with population limit which will lead to the presence of fewer cars in the streets.
Another reason of why I do not concur with the latter perspective in the introductory paragraph lies in the fact that problems like increasing the fossil fuel cost and air pollution will be more sever, making governments to utilize strategies by which the quality of public transportation will increased, and people will be encouraged to employ public transportation rather than their private cars. As a result, the number of cars will be decreased.
Last but not least, if someone from the 17th had been asked about what the future of horses and carts would be like, they might have answered that nothing would be changed. However, as we travel through time from the past to the present, it can be observed that all of the mankind's inventions and crafts have their own expiring date. In spite of the complexity and elaboration of each, they have been dominated by new creations and appliances.
In summary, having considered all the aforementioned ingredients discussed above, I reiterate my point of view that in the new twenty years, use of cars will be diminished on the grounds that environmental consideration, advancement, and limiting population will reducing the number cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...commonly perceived, has to be in a rush so as to not to be left behind in contending for...
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Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
..., managing time plays a pivotal role in ones life. Unfortunately, in todays modern w...
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Line 2, column 481, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an excellent fashion" with adverb for "excellent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ffic, the time that they can exploit it in an excellent fashion. The more the number of cars increases,...
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Line 2, column 732, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nded vertically instead of horizontally so as to ease transportation, has aggravated the...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...e quality of public transportation will increased, and people will be encouraged to emplo...
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Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...to the present, it can be observed that all of the mankinds inventions and crafts have the...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...vancement, and limiting population will reducing the number cars.
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pulation will reducing the number cars.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'as to', 'in summary', 'as a result', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.166 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.068 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.046263068375 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.036 0.0685040099705 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.158 0.118717715034 133% => OK
Participles: 0.072 0.0351676179071 205% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.8722710228 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.102 0.0887237588012 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.026 0.0209618222197 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012 0.0139019557991 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2688.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 455.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90769230769 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334065934066 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243956043956 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193406593407 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131868131868 0.112833075102 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8722710228 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52967032967 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 61.9523549617 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 28.4375 20.5533526081 138% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.882521086 48.84282405 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.0 120.699889404 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4375 20.5533526081 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 52.8331043956 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.90909090909 1.45489161554 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220008200996 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147364469338 0.103427244359 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0723288625876 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.665411838053 0.497263757937 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150165650475 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107713788182 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808446207055 0.0781384742642 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.458355929761 0.336927656856 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.125506742768 0.067059652881 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162567416295 0.210909579961 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610759586818 0.0618886996521 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 76 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23 Out of 30
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