Tpo 33
Without any shadow of doubt, people are the cornerstone of a successful society; indeed, the more individuals of a country are qualified, the more powerful the country is. In this regard, education plays a pivotal role in preparing them in the future. Given the existing educational system, some believe that it stands to reason that when students do their projects in a group, they learn in an effective manner in comparison to that they do their projects alone, while others hold the opposite view. I, personally, subscribe to the first attitude based on quite a few reasons, three of the most substantial of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
the most compelling reason is that by doing projects in a group, students can save time, due to the fact that in order for doing a project, students are required to spend numerous time to find proper information, and then they should organize them, that both of organizing and finding information are time consuming and boring. I clarify my point of view with a true story that happened to me. When I was in high school, I was supposed to do a chemistry project, it took me a great deal of time to find proper resources between various books and scholars. Then, I should read them and type and gist of it. I did not have any time to study my lessons, which affected my exams adversely. Finally, I could not prepare it on time even though I tried a lot. However, when students are supposed to work together, they share the work, that helps them not only to save more time, but also to do their in an excellent fashion, which leads to increase their class performance and higher score.
Another interpretation as to why I do not concur with the latter perspective in the introductory paragraph lies in the fact that since the dawn of humanity, human beings have been bestowed with an irreplaceable gift, communication. People communicate with each other for various issues. Working in a group gives students a chance to make new friends, which helps them not only to expand their friendship's network, but also to enjoy their lives better. For example, when I was in university, I had to work in a group project, at first I did not know anyone, but as time passed, I managed to make new friends, and I had a great time with them.
Last but not least, students can expand their knowledge, since they can share their knowledge with each other. Moreover, they can have a better understanding about their problems because different people consider problems from various points that gives students an opportunity to consider advantages and disadvantages of issues that helps them to make solve their problems in a wise manner.
In summary, having considered all the aforementioned arguments discussed above, I firmly endorse my point of view that the merits of working in a group project weight those of doing their work alone on the grounds that students can have more fun through making new friends and do their work more effective. In addition, they can enhance their general knowledge and solve their problems easier.
- The extended family is less important now than it was in the past. 73
- TPO 34 70
- tpo 17 73
- TPO-43 - Independent Writing Task Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wa 76
- argument 1 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective manner" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o their projects in a group, they learn in an effective manner in comparison to that they do their pro...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... which are elaborated upon hereunder. the most compelling reason is that by doing...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an excellent fashion" with adverb for "excellent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...to save more time, but also to do their in an excellent fashion, which leads to increase their class pe...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a wise manner" with adverb for "wise"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...helps them to make solve their problems in a wise manner. In summary, having considered all th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20882852292 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.164685908319 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0730050933786 0.0866891130778 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0509337860781 0.046263068375 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0899830220713 0.0685040099705 131% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118845500849 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.044142614601 0.0351676179071 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67369980653 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0373514431239 0.0309702414327 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0848896434635 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0152801358234 0.0209618222197 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0220713073005 0.0139019557991 159% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3068.0 2387.08602151 129% => OK
No of words: 528.0 408.028673835 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81060606061 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318181818182 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248106060606 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179924242424 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0965909090909 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67369980653 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49053030303 0.524397521467 94% => OK
Word variations: 58.2563850251 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.7894736842 20.5533526081 135% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.1930071658 48.84282405 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.473684211 120.699889404 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7894736842 20.5533526081 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 52.6000797448 45.7405998639 115% => OK
Elegance: 1.21666666667 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0994151706067 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0568237766722 0.0752933317313 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522515719999 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181941973938 0.151897553556 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350381944584 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0640397053793 0.067059652881 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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