In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today
TOEFL
Technology has advanced at a supreme rate and made human life comfortable and productive. Yet, these advancements have been at the cost of harming the natural environment and causing various serious issues such as global warming and climate change. In my opinion, there will be fewer cars in use in than there are today, in twenty years. I will substantiate and justify my reasons for my opinion.
To begin with, cars have a detrimental effect on the surrounding as they release noxious and deleterious gases into the environment such as carbon monoxide. In addition to this, the number of cars on roads have quadrapled in the last decade. This has caused the overall global temperature to increase. Therefore, I feel companies will direct their thoughts to ways to sustain the environment. For example, Tesla has paved the way for future electric cars which do not need fuel to run and neither release any hazardous gases into the environment. They have been at the forefront of this innovation .Many companies are now working towards making environment-friendly technologies and investing in electric cars and bikes. With so much innovation happening, car pooling also should be made mandatory to reduce the number of cars to keep the emissions in check. Therefore, I feel the number of cars are bound to decrease in twenty years.
Secondly, many leading developing countries have made the rule that one family should be having one car. In addition to this, there has been a large improvement in public transportation such as trains, metros and public bus. For example, Hyperloop has come with a brilliant solution. They have developed pods in a train which will help people travel over long distances in a very short amount of time. Although it is in production, the tests simulations have proved to be truly breath-taking. It has reduced a car journey of two hundread kilometres between two cities from three hours to half-hour. With technology ameliorating at such a great speed, in the next twenty years, I am positive that many more companies are going to be inventing and coming up with brilliant solutions to overcome the problems associated with cars.
Therefore, I firmly reiterate that the number of cars will be fewer in twenty years. Moreover, I feel people are aware of the problem at hand associated with vehicles and will willingly switch to public transport and other means to curb the issue and help heal this world to its former glory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to fuel
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rld to its former glory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i feel, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2354368932 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82782198849 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541262135922 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.608126548 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.619047619 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283438019801 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927948315643 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151455831056 0.0737576698707 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189690315648 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639300418164 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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