In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Even though there is a popular agreement that there will be fewer cars in the next twenty years, I have a different opinion. I strongly believe that people have more cars in the next twenty years. The basis of my opinion is Educational and Social perspectives.
Educationally, people will have many cars in the next twenty years. It will help people to grow smarter when people have advanced technology, they will have a big chance to absorb a sea of knowledge since they will discuss an array of topics. Along with this, involving modern types of cars enables people to have a faster commute allowing them to use their strategic planning and thinking and enhance them as well. Furthermore, When this happens, people will be able to boost their imagination and creativity as well as their knowledgeable skills so that people will be more focused and attentive. Indeed if people have more innovative and newest technology cars, they would be able to improve their command and performance. As a result, educationally Involving the latest cars in everyday life is directly related to a better lifestyle
From a social standpoint, getting up-to-date cars could help people to improve their communication and social skills. The invention of New hybrid and electric cars such as Tesla, allows people to have a comfortable zone.
This, in turn, enables them to take a short trip worldwide and gather a variety of new information about modern and the latest car. Moreover, having such technology aids skills. In other words, if people use more cars, they would be able to expand their social circle. Socially having more cars has a positive impact on people's interpersonal life
In conclusion, for all the reasons stated above, I encourage all people to consider going back and forth and travel a lot. if they do this they will discover for themselves universally and making a decision has a countless number of education and social benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99074074074 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7162510447 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521604938272 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3407356921 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211903384188 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868032389598 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07531312527 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122894712222 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765254030376 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.