University education should include an internship
there are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account if college education should include an internship or not. Many people may disagree with the statement for the sake of unnecessary requirements, time-wasting, too commercial, and so forth. For me, I believe academy education ought to incorporate an internship.
Obviously, joining an enterprise internship not only broads one’s horizons, but also expands a social relationship. For example, if a student participates an internship in whatever company, he or she has to engage in business stuffs. In other words, he or she has to make contribution to the company. In order to do that, there is a lot of things or skills has to learn, it’s beneficial and advantageous to one’s knowledge. With these skills, students are expected to be more deft than other candidates due to experience in an interview competition after they graduate from schools.
The another conspicuous benefit is better social network. For instance, as students take internship, they have to work with colleagues in enterprises and they’ll get familiar with their colleagues. if they do great jobs, their managers or colleagues understand, that is change to build a splendid reputation and social network precedent to graduation. Furthermore, if they have opportunities to get involved in coordinate with other departments, they will know more people as well as more people know them. Therefore, in the long run pupils who are in internship could benefit more than their interpersonal relationship rapidly. after they graduate, they are apt to have more opportunities than others because of accumulated reputation and comprehensive social network.
On the contrary, those who are absent in internship could have drawbacks, could take more time keeping pace with others after hired. because anything is unfamiliar to them, they have to learn and train from very beginning level and it costs entrepreneur more before they could make real contribution.
In conclusion, because of learning more, better interpersonal relationship and deft. that is why I believe that university education certainly have to include an internship as an essential requirement for pupils.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57142857143 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2151526303 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559766763848 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5897701835 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243844007986 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878019197765 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138705569533 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176737148823 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145935964097 0.0645574589148 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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