at what age people allow their children to have a decision
In many countries laws allow people aged 18 years to have decision, to run a business in contract to others .Otherwise laws , we find two kind of people their give children their liberate in take decision in 21 or early at the age of 18.
Starting, with the first kind of people who believe that kids can not behave on their owe until 18 years.
this kind of parents are vary fear about their younger , they thought that kids go one with bad guys so they can have their freedom to make their decision . Moreover, they believe that Children with 18 years have not experience in live to deal individually and fixed problem. In that this type of parents try to train their kids to take their on decision in some situation for example in buying clothes or choose university
Moving to other people who believe that children must have their own decision at age of 18 years. They insist that aged 18 years have to leave on his own . allowing to 18 years travel abroad and continue their degree . According to them , leaving kids to have their own decision and fixed problem they meet is good idea and children get experience from it
At the end , we conclude that either leave children have their own decision at the age of 18 or 21 years depend on parents' culture , young education and their behavior
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...18 or 21 years depend on parents culture , young education and their behavior
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...ure , young education and their behavior
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23626651307 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504273504274 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.2538502016 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473919179662 0.236089414692 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224564546517 0.076458572812 294% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129650648629 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299308690906 0.150856017488 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124908920026 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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