What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Human beings have limited time in the earth and they make a lot of crucial decisions in this precious period. But the most important one is probably having children altering peoples plans until their last breath. Also, people aim that their children are brought up as well as they can. I will elaborate on the profound three qualities of being a good child, who is irrelevant to passing years, in the following part of the essay.
Initially; children’s value is basically measured by their education level. Therefore, parents strive for their children’s education from elementary school to institute and make effort more than other issues. As an illustration, If a child graduated from one of the best-known university in the country, this situation would be related to his/ her skill or capacity. By this way, these children are surely called the good son or girl of the family in every centuries.
Furthermore, helping other people is believed to be a prevalent rule of being a shining child in the public. Thus, the children’s behavior, taught in their growing years, gets people to figure out children's quality. In other words, the privileged children always charm the people living around them with their behavior, any time period can not influence on to deplete the merit of helpful.
Lastly, it is obvious that the well growth children have to certainly avoid any offense. For instance, society is really impressed by people called good citizen. Since the good citizens are especially the role model of the parents who their children are oriented by in their life. Such as duration of education, socializing or etc.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that to being a good son or daughter, children must be well educated, helpful and a good citizen whether the years pass or not. this is all to say, parents should assure that they absolutely left their only asset, benefitting the world, behind them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7216314661 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1609266883 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5294117647 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814116099184 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288006569705 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332744703165 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510093815542 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028278391723 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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