What historical event in your country has had a major effect on your country?
That historical events especially the Chaldoran Battle plays an important role in the contemporary history of our country is an undeniable fact. Should people realize the significance of this event in the history of our country, they will ponder over it much more scrupulously. This issue has recently been the topic of debate among historiographers.
I believe that we should think about our history and patriot characters in the past and we must organize them. There is no doubt that Chalderan battle, which is one the most important war of the eighteenth century, can be useful in future decides, and these are my justification, To begin with, Chalderan battle one the most dramatic war in our history. Although my country defeated in this war, when I read about the loyalty of Iranian warriors, I feel pride. The second reason that why I select this event the fact that the location of children battle is near in my city and whenever we go there, not only do we obtain an integrate image from past but also do we obtain a lot about our culture. When we are going Chalderan, we are knowing that our life is a result of a series of events from our past. Therefore Chalderan battle one of the most important event in our country. The last but not the least, this city has very kind people, when we go children, I can forget all my problems and I feel refreshed greatly.
Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective. I believe an English proverb, expresses that everything has two sides. Chaldoran is a very beautiful city in our province. This city has so pretty landscapes. The interesting thing is that adults are keen to visit this city as well as their children.
By taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drown about the issue. Understanding the significance of the historical event in our life is logical. Attending to this issue meticulously contributes to using others experiences in our life, and can improve several aspects of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 622, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ever we go there, not only do we obtain an integrate image from past but also do we obtain a...
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Line 2, column 730, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[4]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...ulture. When we are going Chalderan, we are knowing that our life is a result of a series o...
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Line 2, column 730, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ulture. When we are going Chalderan, we are knowing that our life is a result of a series o...
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Line 2, column 805, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...lt of a series of events from our past. Therefore Chalderan battle one of the most import...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, i feel, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84702549575 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84492050775 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529745042493 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1344962464 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0555555556 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0700559975035 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026661201289 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435154547699 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492447536339 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397830609263 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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