What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
While overall we should learn some skills to success, there are many skills that require academic knowledge and self confidence in order to overcome the challenges to success. Without a doubt, the most reasonablee skills to success are to obtain an academic knowledge along with self-confidence and hard work.
First and foremost, the academic knowledge is considered as one of the most essential aspect in our life to be a successful person by raising the critical thinking, intellectual capacity and abilities to learn new skills as well. Because of this skill, people will be willing to broaden thier horizons of knowledge and get in touch with their creative side also, thereby they reflect their academic education. Consequently, academic knowledge leads to success and prosperity. In this era for example, no one achieves goals without getting into academic knowledge by attending colleges, universities or online courses. The society here puts paramount importance on academic advancement. Peoples' goal nowadays is to expand their skills to sucess by broaden thier academic advancement to get into a better future.
Second, self confidence and believing in your self are the title of every successful work. Self confidence allows people to face of all the obstacles occur in their ways, delegate with many changes at their work and overcome the challenges smoothly just like the mountain that doesn't shake by the winds. Recent studies show that when people have self confidence, they can invest more energy and more time into their jobs to lead into success. For instance, a friend of mine failed many times in his life without any progress to be a successful man. But, one day he decided to stand again on his feet and face the problems he had while he wasn't has a self confidence and he never believed in his self before. As a result, he began to rebuild his personality and confidence to attain the goals he wanted to lead into a bright future. This moment shows that he is one of most successful persons in this world. If he never got up again, he wouldn't be a successful person nowadays.
Finally, no one can attains goal without working hard. To distinguish between people who attain to reach the top of the mountain and learn how to work hard from people who just want to do their work without being successful, we can submit that the hard workers will be more successful in their lives. Talking about my friend as an example, when he became a successful person in his life, he began to work very hard to reach into his level of thrives. In addition to that, the main point to live a good and happy life is when we are being successful.
To sum up, people have many skills to learn to lead into success. Started from obtaining the fundamental knowledge through out the academic advancement, being self confident and believing in their selves to become hard workers. All of these skills can lead to a successful future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2452.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 501.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89421157685 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61622668231 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467065868263 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 759.6 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5195770918 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.608695652 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7826086957 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197020775688 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717653532316 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580301979435 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133054277244 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427805822333 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.