What is your favorite recreational activity? Describe it and say why you enjoy doing it.
Today, there are a lot of opportunities to develop you creativeness while spending your time in an efficient way. Having a creative hobby, like painting, keeps your mind active and may improve your overall quality of life. So, according to me, painting is the greatest recreational activity because of several reasons.
To begin with, painting can decrease you anxiety level dramatically and helps you to heal your mental-health issues. Finding an emotional release like painting allows a person’s mind to relax and let go of all the problems that contribute to a high stress level. This aspect is crucial for my personal experience as I am in a really competitive environment and under the pressure of academic success. After taking all the final exams, painting is a savior to comfort myself and find peace at the touch of brush to the canvas. A low stress level leads to a happier, healthier lifestyle. Therefore painting is an indispensable part of my life.
Moreover, it has proven scientifically that painting supports your brain growth by stimulating creative skills. Even left-brainers people who are more analytical then right-brainers can enhance their critical thinking by practicing and foster them to solve problems much quicker. Motor skills like handling a paintbrush increases the mobility in the hands and the fingers. The utility of painting is not limited only by this, it also sharpens your mind through conceptual visualization and boosts memory skills. People who are doing recreational activities such as writing, painting and drawing have less chance of developing memory loss illnesses when they get older.
In addition to the benefits to your health and brain, painting also promotes your emotional growth. Painting enables you to convey your emotions through artwork which is a helpful experience for us. Experimenting with different painting techniques allows you to understand what triggers feelings such as happiness, sadness, love or anger. Painting is a type of healing through abstract emotional expression.
In conclusion, painting plays a major life in my life and I hold the belief that it made me a better person in every aspect. It has increased my problem solving skills, reduced my stress level and became a part of my life.
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- TOEFL Integrated 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...u creativeness while spending your time in an efficient way. Having a creative hobby, like painting...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...eads to a happier, healthier lifestyle. Therefore painting is an indispensable part of my...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...brainers people who are more analytical then right-brainers can enhance their critic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23835616438 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91448907621 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605479452055 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8417073908 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147280934343 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045958347088 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498035096641 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874177761584 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629207936026 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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