Making progress and succeed in achieving something is not something dependent on one factor. There are many hidden layers conducting this process like chance and hardworking. It is obvious that both of these two factors are important for succeeding. Personally I know some people who are really diligent however, they are not in proper positions, because the luck percentage was not high enough,. But if there is one preference I would choose hardworking. The reasons which support my idea are listed below.
First, Luck is not something predictable and reliable. You cannot waste your golden time doing nothing and wait for the great day when chance knocks your door. Even though chance has a key role in succession of many people you know, without trying the good chance would lead to nothing. For example, some of my friends found their jobs by chance, but their effort for saving that position is undeniable.
Second, making up a clear aim and form out a program to achieve it is a safer way for improving. Really successful people have a well-arranged daily program and they follow a particular style of living which suit them best. But the most common thing in the life of popular successful people is that, their achievements are not gained by chance. They had made a lot of effort and had never been disappointed in their failure.
Third, Chance will not always lead to something you are really interested in. However, investing your time and energy for something you really like, shape a more favorable result. Getting anything after trying hard and thinking all nights long has always a better taste. For instance, trying very hard, I succeeded to go to university, so, it was really valuable for me.
In conclusion, there are many factors which are effective in accomplishing a particular goal. But still I think hardworking is the most important one. Without trying hard other factors would not work anymore.
- "when people succeed it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success". Do you agree or disagree?explain.
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- "when people succeed it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success". Do you agree or disagree?explain. 60
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'third', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.187845303867 0.229887763892 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.182320441989 0.158761421928 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10773480663 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0828729281768 0.046263068375 179% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0690607734807 0.0685040099705 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0994475138122 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0662983425414 0.0351676179071 189% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.61552561176 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0138121546961 0.0309702414327 45% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00552486187845 0.00188951952338 292% => OK
Determiners: 0.0662983425414 0.0887237588012 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138121546961 0.0209618222197 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138121546961 0.0139019557991 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1930.0 2387.08602151 81% => OK
No of words: 323.0 408.028673835 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97523219814 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371517027864 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232198142415 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160990712074 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120743034056 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61552561176 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582043343653 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 64.5246324597 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.380952381 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1052292309 48.84282405 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9047619048 120.699889404 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.644075263715 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 38.6007666224 45.7405998639 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.05785123967 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156313070726 0.300154397459 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0522587871416 0.103427244359 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.049647874644 0.0752933317313 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.441148647751 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0867094905895 0.151897553556 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514687922499 0.114077575197 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319693601086 0.0781384742642 41% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.177481561073 0.336927656856 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0707615423729 0.067059652881 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940167081708 0.210909579961 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293972894461 0.0618886996521 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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