Which do you prefer to do?
Doing same things or trying new things
Human life has gone through numerous changes due to our ancestors’ progresses. Some people willing to act repeatedly their works without any change through that. On the other hand, there are people who willing to experience new situations and conditions during their life. I strongly believe life means experiencing novel situations and there are several reasons to this belief.
First, from my point of view, human cannot express and strengthen their abilities and talents without challenging them in novel situation. Further, previous ability bring new and contemporary ability and they are linked together like a string. For Instance, taking courses in academic levels is sort of challenging novel experience which student should challenge with them by their former abilities to gain new valuable knowledge and this process connectedly continue until they graduate. Therefore, we can gain more ability by cultivating our old abilities and plant a new ability based of them.
Second, humans always need to adapt with harsh and extreme situations throughout history as our ancestors accepted these alterations and adopted with them to be survived. In fact, they confronted new problems and strived to exploit their abilities and invented new tools to overcome these problems. For instance, they needed to overcome their hungry then they utilize all their surroundings as hunting tools, they attempted to construct a shelter to survive their lives or they later invented language to communicate together. Therefore, whether we want or not, we will encounter new situations which compel us to do something new.
Finally, I believe acting just routine thing is boring and make us frustrated. Because I believe life means progress and successfulness and they will not be obtained just when we challenge our self confronting new situations and attempt to use our abilities and talents.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should encourage their children to do their homework independently rather than help them to do it. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's a waste of money for the government to fund space travel or space exploration. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with following statement? It is better to make friends with intelligent people than the people who have a good sense of humor. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Do you agree or disagree It is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than ask other for advice 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, in fact, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46258503401 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7963900491 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.922626895 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957660953017 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356371653194 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517085795883 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530212833023 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298871407466 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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