Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Having a job is indispensable part of every human life. There are several factors such as the atmosphere of the workplace, colleagues, salary, being permanent and so on which make a job more satisfying. As far as I am concerned, one may not find a job which has all this factors simultaneously, therefore, there will be preference against each factors. On the one hand there people who prefer having a secure job rather than having more satisfying job and on the other hand, there are people who prefer being unemployed until they find the job which satisfies their needs. I believe the former is carry further weight on the account of following primary reasons.
From economical point of view, being further unemployed means much money should be borrowed in order to continue living. In fact, if one didn’t take a job in order to get a more satisfying one, therefore, s/he should expense a lot of money while s/he doesn’t receive any wage. On the other hand, if one prefer a more satisfying job while it may not be secure, therefore, s/he may earn more money for a short interval but s/he will be unemployed several months or even years. As a result, s/he should expense the money which has been deposited during his/her unemployment. In fact, s/he has received the same money as s/he could earn from that secure job for working all the time. For example, I have two friends which one buy and sell automobile and earn high salary but he is consecutively unemployed and the other one permanently works as a clerk in a big company and receive a normal salary. Surprisingly, the former is always borrowing money from the latter one.
From physical and mental health point of view, being unemployed may damage one physically and mentally. When one is unemployed, s/he always thinks regarding his/her unemployment. Sometimes unemployed people come to conclusion that they have not as much as skills which are necessary to find a satisfying job. In more strict cases, people also lose their confidence regarding the skills which they really have. Consequently they will be upset by passing the time. On the other hand, being at home and not having physical performance will bring about further weight whereby other ills will appear. I remember last year my friend could be employed in a company as a worker but he didn’t accept that since he believed that he should be employed as an engineer not as a simple worker. After that opportunity, he hasn’t had any other opportunity so far, therefore, he has got depressed since he think he will not find a suitable job in future and has lost the previous opportunity.
People who are unemployed will negatively affect their family and society. In fact, people who reject a secure job in order to find more satisfying job will usually be deceived to have illegal jobs which they may earn high salary in short period. On the other words, some people doesn’t know their skills well and reject opportunity after opportunity in order to get prestigious job while the job which is in their mind is beyond their skills. Consequently, they decide to manipulate their skills in illegal way in order to satisfy their wills. For instance, one of my friend was expertise in computer programming and software but he couldn’t find any satisfying job, therefore, he become a hacker. He was hacker for several years and one days he decided to rob from a bank, he did that but police arrested him and put him on the jail for 5 years.
Taken together, having secure job right away has more advantages than having more satisfying job in future. Although different people have different opinions and there may be advantages in the latter case.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Consequently,
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... opportunity in order to get prestigious job while the job which is in their mind...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact, in short, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3077.0 1977.66487455 156% => OK
No of words: 633.0 407.700716846 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86097946288 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01592376844 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6938504246 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423380726698 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 964.8 618.680645161 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7728360957 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.892857143 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6071428571 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286630146277 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927225042703 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815328726353 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208967292459 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681259409623 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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