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Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends. a. joining a sports team, b. participate in community activities, c. traveling.
All three options listed are practicable ways of making new friends. Based on my personal experience and observation of life, I believe the best way to make new friends, for students, is to participate in community activities.
First of all, most students are not very wealthy. By participating in community activities, one can make new friends without spending a lot of money. For example, for activities such as charity work, a student can contribute without spending any money. Students only need to devote their time and efforts, which is well appreciated. On the other hand, if a student choos...
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