Which would you choose a high paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends Explain your choice using specific reasons and

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...b that would give the person little time to be with his family is better or a low...
^^
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'deny'
Suggestion: deny
...job has some advantages that no one can denies them. If you have a high paying job you...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
.... Although you can not go the vacations many time in the year, you can go a long luxury v...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...that we work to live, not live to work. the goal of working is to be able to enjoy ...
^^^
Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ith our families but some people forget this goals. their goal is to just work and e...
^^^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Their
...lies but some people forget this goals. their goal is to just work and earn money but...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 604, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...hough he earns a lot of money, he never have much time to spend it with us. We alway...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, for example, i think, in summary, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15733333333 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11508865062 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418666666667 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1456489572 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0526315789 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405779513486 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13724252619 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111563446935 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267723743729 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780185931369 0.0645574589148 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.14 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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