Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends?
A lot of people would struggle in front of this question, but I’m quite sure about which position I would take in this situation: I would prefer a lower-paying job with shorter hours for many reasons.
First of all, I do not really care about money, and I find that spending time with the people you love is much more important than having a high-paying job. Friends and family are the things that really matters in my life, those who makes you feel alive. All the memories we have are in a certain way related to our family or friends, and less time with those people would means exchanging our (potential) memories for money, and I would never to this.
Although a high-paying job could guarantee a certain wealth in financial terms for my family, that does not mean a happier life, and that is exactly where I wanted to get: if sacrificing time for a better salary does not necessarily mean to have a happier life, is it worth it then?
Plus, unless you really love your job, working a lot of hours a week can be very frustrating, a thing that can result in a really unsatisfying life, that is the exact contrary of what most of the people, including me, look for in their life. Considering that only a few people manage to get a working place that they really love, it is more likely for someone to find a compromise between how much you work and how much you like your job, leaving some time free to spend with family and friends.
In conclusion, as a lower salary can make life a bit harder but not necessarily sad, especially if you use your spare time to do what you like in company of who you love, on the other hand, a higher salary does not mean a happier life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ou feel alive. All the memories we have are in a certain way related to our family ...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
..., and less time with those people would means exchanging our potential memories for m...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...free to spend with family and friends. In conclusion, as a lower salary can mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, then, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39297124601 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36752639495 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517571884984 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.364699945 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.875 100.406767564 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.125 20.6045352989 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364403781519 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164279789159 0.076458572812 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747934643112 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198608173202 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097853365328 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 11.7677419355 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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