Work is very important to individuals. people concern about their career because by getting a good job, they can get good salary. Whether people enjoy with work in only three days weekly for long hours , or work five days with short hour. Admittedly, some people prefer to work three days with long hour inorder to get two more freetime. But, in my opinion, I prefer to work five days weekly instead of three days. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my pointb of view in this subject.
First, working a three days weekly is more effective. This is mainly because , employees will work short time like only eight hours daily. This suitable time which enable worker to concentrate on their taskes without feel stressful or tired with more than eight hours daily to compensate working only three days by increase day hours. This is my experience in this issue. I have been working as a dentist. In the begining , I try to work only three days by week. After a while, I felt tired and my performence become worse, hence I can not continue in this schedule. Therefore, I decided to change this manner and work five days weekly rather than three days. from my previous example, we can figure out how is working few days with long hours daily will be not effective.
Second, workers who work only three days believe, they will be able to spend more time with their families. this is due to the fact that they will have more. Incontrast, when they became tired or stressed . They will want more time to take brakfter return back. Inaddition, companies also will impated negatively with this system, because, they need to hire more employees to work in the two more days. This will cost companies more, they need to train these new employees. furthermore, these additional workers need computers and more room. In my opinion, it is cheaper for companies to encourage their employees by give the extra time salary to motivat them to finish their work in perfect result.
Tom wrap in, I concur with working five days with less hours rather than three days with long hours. This is due to exposition which that mentioned above.
Work is very important to individuals. people concern about their career because by getting a good job, they can get good salary. Whether people enjoy with work in only three days weekly for long hours , or work five days with short hour. Admittedly, some people prefer to work three days with long hour inorder to get two more freetime. But, in my opinion, I prefer to work five days weekly instead of three days. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my pointb of view in this subject.
First, working a three days weekly is more effective. This is mainly because , employees will work short time like only eight hours daily. This suitable time which enable worker to concentrate on their taskes without feel stressful or tired with more than eight hours daily to compensate working only three days by increase day hours. This is my experience in this issue. I have been working as a dentist. In the begining , I try to work only three days by week. After a while, I felt tired and my performence become worse, hence I can not continue in this schedule. Therefore, I decided to change this manner and work five days weekly rather than three days. from my previous example, we can figure out how is working few days with long hours daily will be not effective.
Second, workers who work only three days believe, they will be able to spend more time with their families. this is due to the fact that they will have more. Incontrast, when they became tired or stressed . They will want more time to take brakfter return back. Inaddition, companies also will impated negatively with this system, because, they need to hire more employees to work in the two more days. This will cost companies more, they need to train these new employees. furthermore, these additional workers need computers and more room. In my opinion, it is cheaper for companies to encourage their employees by give the extra time salary to motivat them to finish their work in perfect result.
Tom wrap in, I concur with working five days with less hours rather than three days with long hours. This is due to exposition which that mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, second, so, therefore, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69047619048 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29469487551 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484126984127 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8818518078 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.92 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.12 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.24 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.523479013768 0.236089414692 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162963561697 0.076458572812 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15896490295 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368255149897 0.150856017488 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.225377304653 0.0645574589148 349% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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