Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The work condition is very important for workers. Although, they may not have a chance to choose what kind of work they do because work condition determined by employers and they must follow the rules. Definitely, some people if asked would agree to do the different type of tasks during workday make the employees more satisfaction while others have a negative attitude. As I am concerned, I completely agree with this idea. In the following paragraphs, I will shed light on the arguments to support my views.
The first point to be mentioned is that diversity tasks make workers more productive. If they have to do the same tasks during their workday it would make them frustrating. For doing different tasks you need more concentration and energy in order to do your duty very well. For example, I worked for a research center that did an experiment and write a scientific paper in different areas that related to diet and nutrition condition of people. At first, it was hard because I have to do research on different topics but over time, I was so motivated to finish my task without being exhausted.
Another reason that deserves some words is that this way helps employee learns different knowledge and skills. Every work needs specific skills or information, so as you do the different task you learn more and more. Sometimes, it results in, you realize that you are gifted in specific work and it might change your work path. To illustrate that idea let’s consider the following example. I remember, one of my friends worked for a company to write the paper, doing a lecture and other works. Base the experiences he understood, he is a really good writer and he decided to quit his job and improves his writing skills. Now, he is one of the famous and popular writers in my country and his books sell after a short time they released.
By the way of the conclusion, base on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that diversity task is really beneficial for workers because their productivity increase and it gives them a chance to gain more information and new skills, so they might distinguish their secret talents.
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- TPO 33 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ity tasks make workers more productive. If they have to do the same tasks during t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, well, while, for example, kind of, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77419354839 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66763119913 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534946236559 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4914762844 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291813873883 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910206415181 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874312741928 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180586199814 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747919240199 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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